Wet: Chapter 6
November 3rd, 2009 by pgabrielSo after making my way into the tower I found a man who is William Akers but he turned out to be someone else and said Rubi had killed his son. So someone has set her up. We find out that the person who set her up is the same one who stabbed her. He has turned out to be the leader of the drug trade in China and William Akers’s son was the only person in his way. SO its back to Hong Kong again, so more and more of the same old killing guys jumping over stuff. This game is really starting to blow and I should have chosen easy instead of Hard because its getting so difficult that I spent 4 hours on this one chapter alone. Anyways the chapter ends with you making it through a dense jungle base to some other base.


















November 9th, 2009 at 11:04 pm
Your first sentence is a run-on and your second sentence is almost a fragment. Also, clarity of who he/she is would be nice (grammatically speaking).